Not enough substance and what there was was rushed, these two characters didn't gel for me. There's no depth at all to this story.
It was hot when he was watching her but other than that it was a bit blah. It wasn't written well enough to be erotic, it was just a quick, smutty read.
I'm not convinced that it's helpful to have your 'friends' rate your book a five star read when it clearly isn’t. Fortunately sense prevailed in the ratings once it had been out for a while.
